All Comments on 'Dancing With Thunder'

Keep up the great work.

I whish you would have fucked in the rain.But still hot had to jackoff to that

Great story, loved the detail

Honestly I've never read a gay male story before, but if there are more like this one I might have to make it a regular habit. I didn't think as a woman I would be aroused by the thought of two men, but your descriptions and style are perfect anyone attracted to men can't help but cum to your works. Thanks for sharing.

hot, hot, hot, hot...just "perfect..."

Rain will never be the same for me again. Description was dynamite! Keep up the great work!

Holy...wow... that was utterly... Amazing!

Wow! This story gets a guy steamed up, and not from the rain, either!

Excellent! I guess I need to get more action and graphic sex in my stuff!! I was rivited the entire time! Next chance I get I will keep your story in mind as I indulge, if you know what I mean ;-)

Dneal

hotter than watching a man cum..is watching two men cum together. Felt like I was in the room watching, while at the same time feeling everything too. So damn hot. I will most DEFINTELY be keeping my eye out for your work!The thing I really liked was you made it white hot and sexy as hell, naughty talk and all..without it really feeling "dirty"...not sure if that makes sense to you at all..but suffice it to say I enjoyed the hell out of this. Would LOVE to read another encounter between the two of them...mmm yeah...is that a storm on the horizon?.....

Probably the most erotic story that I have read at this or any other site.Don't wait too long before offering another story. i can't wait.

Brilliant story. Loved all the detail and how well you write! Keep up the good work

I enjoy how the story begins with an easy, casual attitude and quickly escalates!

Easy to see why this story made the top lists. Excellent work, well written and very passionite.

wow that was hot just shot a load in my hand and licking it all off need a cock in my mouth now.would love to see what one fills like in my ass.

Hoooooot hot hot hot....

A fine depiction of HOT wall-to-wall SEX! But there's no plot, little demonstration of personal connection. It is merely two rampant cocks working hard to please themselves (and each other).

that was hot as hell !!!!!!!

nicely written.

Get me a cold shower stat

tissues now.lol

omigod

That was very hot.

You really need to write a part 2 !!!

This was very, very sexy.

Part two soon please

That story was awesome,I started stroking my cock,and I couldn't stop,I would have loved to be there, I remember when I was in the marines, AND it was raining one night when we were in the field,me and one of the guys ended up in a little two man tent, we were both soaking wet and he said you don't mind if I take my clothes off, I said no, HE asked me if I was going to,I said I don't know, HE then said why because I'm black and your white, I started laughing and I said what does that got to do with anything , HE said you might be a little embarrassed about the size of my cock,I said I got a nice cock too, HE said let's get naked, and who ever has the biggest cock,the other one has to suck it, I said your going to suck my cock if mines bigger,he said yeah, I asked him if he did it before, he said yeah, I said you really like sucking cock , yeah I love it, he asked me if I ever did,I said no, but I thought about it , HE said you want to try it, I said yeah, I always loved looking at black cocks, he said you like looking at black cock instead of white, I said yeah ,they look so beautiful ,I always wanted to suck a black guy off, HE said you want to right now, I said yeah, HE took his clothes off and so did I, HE said you have a nice cock, I said you have a beautiful one, HE said why don't you give me a good blow job,and I'll give you one, AND if we both love it ,we can do it all the time, I said alright,I went down on him and when I put his cock in my mouth, I knew right there,that I was meant to be a faggot, I gave him the best blow job he ever had,and he gave me the best blow job too, since that night, wa started having sex ,all the time, we were together for four years and I really loved him,and he loved me, but he went home to his wife,and I went back home too, But one thing I'm glad about, I joined the marines and,it rained one night and I sucked my first cock, especially a nice black one, AND fell in love, Now I'm with a black guy, AND that's all I love, Black cocks are the best, I LOVE BEING A FAGGOT,AND I'M SO GLAD I JOINED THE MARINES,

Hot as fuck. Believable. Just the type of story id been looking for! Awesome! Thank you!!!