by vvolfe
I love this story! Thank you so much for the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens! Ian is in for a rough go of things.
I've really enjoyed this story. I wish you hadn't taken so much time between chapters. I hope Emma finds happiness and peace with Ian.
I am loving this story and all your characters but I cant help hate Emma at the moment whither how confusing and stupid she is being but I cant wait to see how you continue this!!!
Well, can't say I didn't see that one coming! Of course, that's not to say I didn't enjoy this installment :-D
Hope the muse stays with you and your worries are few- I can't keep waiting for more, lol!
Ariesgirl = you have clearly never been in a position in which you doubt your own self worth. Vvolfe...that was spot on. Especially after Peter stated that was one of the reasons she was keeping her distance. Besides, the harder Ian has to work for her trust, the sweeter their love will be.
She tried too hard and moved too fast with him without giving her emotions enough time to adjust. I think she should have just stayed the night, fully clothed, and talked. Now she's using Lena's problems as an excuse to run instead of facing her own insecurities.
This was worth the wait;hope you don't take another 5 months before the next chapter LOL..I just love love this story LOL
I will admit, I'm the one who was mean in the first few chapters and gave you 1 or 2 stars. But your writing was more leading me here, leading me there, not enough details about the characters, to vague there... The first few chapters felt more like a manual than a story. BUT, it has gotten better and better as it progresses... but you're still leaving out story lines, minor details that make me ask "WTF is this about" or "We don't know about this story line"... which leads me to hope you have side stories planned. I seriously hope you plan to continue this story now, as you have gotten so much better. (although, with this chapter you kind of rushed everything, although by the end I see why you did, as she wouldn't have left if you hadn't.) So... another chapter pretty please and thank you! :D
I liked it until she left him while he slept.Coward! Then it went down hill from there poor Ian he is my favouite character in this story!
its so sad when she leaves him i starting crying your a great writer keep writing
Ive dodged this story and reading this all this morning , it leads me to this wonderful climax! My god what a unique story and i can see the maturity of your writing. Please come back soon!
and I'm glad I did.
Great series, I read all seven chapters this morning and I'm hooked.
*****
I'm hoping you can finish the series without any more long breaks. If I had known you would be updating sporadically, I would have waited until the story was finished before reading it. But I didn't know that, so here we are. I'd love to know what happens next and I am definitely enjoying the story, it's just bittersweet to know that I may not see a new chapter for another six months.
Hope more is coming soon!
Great stories, I love cliff hangers but don't make me wait to long please :-)
The title says it all. We want to continue feeling the tension between Ian and Emma. It draws us in! Excellent writing improvement.
this was too good to put down.. cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!
Please update . Ive been reading your series all day and I am completely hooked. Pleeeease don't forget about the story & your fans . WE LOVE YOU!! Please come back!
I've really enjoyed this story. Please keep writing! I want to see what happens to Emma and Ian!
For sometimes to forget to vote, because I am so caught up in the story. I must have read ot five times at least! I hope you will find time, and inspiration, to keep continue the story.
Oh please let us know what is happening next. This point of view is not seen in a lot of stories. Most the time it is love at first site and they give in.
You do write so well, and have got an unique viewpoint. I hope you find the time, and inspiration, so write the next chapter!
I NEED to know what happens next, I am completely in love with this story, it is so great and I love all the characters, I'm so mad that Emma left him and I have to know how he gets her back because I know he will :) Please hurry and write the next chapter, waiting like this is killing me!
Are you still working in the story? I'd love to see how Ian finds Emma and what happenes when he does! Give us an update on your progress if your still working on it, can't wait!
Will Ian find Emma and what about the rest of her pack?
Great story
would love to know the end