All Comments on 'Danger Zone Ch. 07'

by vvolfe

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Thank You

I love this story! Thank you so much for the chapter. I can't wait to see what happens! Ian is in for a rough go of things.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story! Please Continue

I've really enjoyed this story. I wish you hadn't taken so much time between chapters. I hope Emma finds happiness and peace with Ian.

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 11 years ago

Emma is one selfish person.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
amazing chapter!!!

I am loving this story and all your characters but I cant help hate Emma at the moment whither how confusing and stupid she is being but I cant wait to see how you continue this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Well, can't say I didn't see that one coming! Of course, that's not to say I didn't enjoy this installment :-D

Hope the muse stays with you and your worries are few- I can't keep waiting for more, lol!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
response to ariesgirl andvvolfe

Ariesgirl = you have clearly never been in a position in which you doubt your own self worth. Vvolfe...that was spot on. Especially after Peter stated that was one of the reasons she was keeping her distance. Besides, the harder Ian has to work for her trust, the sweeter their love will be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A GREAT STORY

I cant wait for the rest .........good stuff

Stephen J

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 11 years ago
Emma screwed up

She tried too hard and moved too fast with him without giving her emotions enough time to adjust. I think she should have just stayed the night, fully clothed, and talked. Now she's using Lena's problems as an excuse to run instead of facing her own insecurities.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow !!

This was worth the wait;hope you don't take another 5 months before the next chapter LOL..I just love love this story LOL

Lady_RayneLady_Rayneabout 11 years ago
Better and better

I will admit, I'm the one who was mean in the first few chapters and gave you 1 or 2 stars. But your writing was more leading me here, leading me there, not enough details about the characters, to vague there... The first few chapters felt more like a manual than a story. BUT, it has gotten better and better as it progresses... but you're still leaving out story lines, minor details that make me ask "WTF is this about" or "We don't know about this story line"... which leads me to hope you have side stories planned. I seriously hope you plan to continue this story now, as you have gotten so much better. (although, with this chapter you kind of rushed everything, although by the end I see why you did, as she wouldn't have left if you hadn't.) So... another chapter pretty please and thank you! :D

willieonewillieoneabout 11 years ago

I liked it until she left him while he slept.Coward! Then it went down hill from there poor Ian he is my favouite character in this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great story

its so sad when she leaves him i starting crying your a great writer keep writing

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 11 years ago

Ive dodged this story and reading this all this morning , it leads me to this wonderful climax! My god what a unique story and i can see the maturity of your writing. Please come back soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
just found you!

and I'm glad I did.

Great series, I read all seven chapters this morning and I'm hooked.

*****

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 11 years ago
It's good but

I'm hoping you can finish the series without any more long breaks. If I had known you would be updating sporadically, I would have waited until the story was finished before reading it. But I didn't know that, so here we are. I'd love to know what happens next and I am definitely enjoying the story, it's just bittersweet to know that I may not see a new chapter for another six months.

Hope more is coming soon!

DirtyNessDirtyNessabout 11 years ago
So looking forward to more

Great stories, I love cliff hangers but don't make me wait to long please :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Time to update

The title says it all. We want to continue feeling the tension between Ian and Emma. It draws us in! Excellent writing improvement.

jLoHjLoHabout 11 years ago
<3

don't make us wait too long.... ^_^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

this was too good to put down.. cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!

nicintasnicintasalmost 11 years ago
WooHoo !!!

Finally noticed your updated chapter. So glad you're back!!!

willieonewillieonealmost 11 years ago
and????

Update again please need next chapter asap!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Whaaa

Please update . Ive been reading your series all day and I am completely hooked. Pleeeease don't forget about the story & your fans . WE LOVE YOU!! Please come back!

Literoticareader99Literoticareader99almost 11 years ago
Can't wait for chapter 8!

I've really enjoyed this story. Please keep writing! I want to see what happens to Emma and Ian!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Sorry

For sometimes to forget to vote, because I am so caught up in the story. I must have read ot five times at least! I hope you will find time, and inspiration, to keep continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Next chapter please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Ahhh what is going to happen?

Oh please let us know what is happening next. This point of view is not seen in a lot of stories. Most the time it is love at first site and they give in.

NordicladyNordicladyover 10 years ago
Please

You do write so well, and have got an unique viewpoint. I hope you find the time, and inspiration, so write the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE!!

I NEED to know what happens next, I am completely in love with this story, it is so great and I love all the characters, I'm so mad that Emma left him and I have to know how he gets her back because I know he will :) Please hurry and write the next chapter, waiting like this is killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Patiently waiting

Please. Please. Please finish this story!

I'm hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please

Please finish the story. I am so hooked!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Are you still working in the story? I'd love to see how Ian finds Emma and what happenes when he does! Give us an update on your progress if your still working on it, can't wait!

darkravenwolfdarkravenwolfover 10 years ago
would love to know what happens

Will Ian find Emma and what about the rest of her pack?

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
i hope that you are planning to finish this

Great story

would love to know the end

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