All Comments on 'Dangerous Illusion - Ch. 01'

Potential...in spades... ;-)

Cmon man. Nothing worse than literary blue balls. This is the most frustrating thing that an author can do to a reader. At a minimum, give each chapter some type of resolution. If you’re posting a chapter of something you haven’t finished, then treat that chapter as its own story and have a complete arc. So you give your readers a semblance of satisfaction for having read your work. If you have the entire storg written and are posting chapter by chapter, then fair enough leave em with a cliff hanger for a week, but don’t post an incomplete work. It’s annoying and makes me not thrilled to check your other work.