All Comments on 'Dangerous Moves'

A bit short by itself, but this chapter has the potential of starting a very entertaining story. I am hoping that you have the next several portions already written.

-- KK in Texas

Well it is an interesting start to a story but there isn't much romance in it yet kind of a bad place to leave off almost like you started the story and stopped before it could get going.

Please submit next installment.....

PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M DYING