All Comments on 'Dania Ch. 04'

This story was on Literotica 2 or 3 years ago. How about a new story.

I commented on this last chapter that Roth isn't very smart. Dania wasn't bothering them. How does he expect her to act after he kidnaps her and tie her up? He would react the same way if he was treated in the same manner. Roth is arrogant and need to take out his anger and guilt on himself.

@Anonymous, yes it was on here a couple of years ago. I realized that I'd written myself into a corner and had nowhere to go and ended up doing a re-write of the entire thing. Things were changed, added, or taken out completely. But I'm glad that you read before.

@everyone else - This group of stories is actually the middle part of a much larger story that I've split into three smaller chunks. The first part deals with Dania's people and the reason for her loss of memory and the last part will deal with her adventures with Kimber.