All Comments on 'Dania Ch. 06'

This is a great story but I feel like I've read it somewhere before.

The story was submitted here a few years ago. But I couldn't finish it because I'd written myself into a corner and I couldn't take it where I wanted it to go. So I had it removed and re-wrote parts of it. The main parts of the story haven't changed, but many of the parts around those larger parts have. But thank you for reading!!