by Darkniciad
This story keeps getting better while losing none of it's sexiness and intensity. Thanks so much for sharing it here!
I want to read faster to find out what happens to these people next but keep slowing myself down so I can enjoy it. Great story, great writing!!
I've just started reading this entire series and this is the best so far. It seems that you're useing erotica as an excuse to write a wonderfuly detailed narrative.
One of the best fantasy stories I've read, certainly the Hottest!
Great characterizations, descriptions of characters and great magic explanations/descriptions. Great battle descriptions....good set up to the battles and.....oh yeah GREAT HOT SEXXX!!!! Could there be too much lesbo sex? NAHHHHHH!!!!! Are you kidding me?!!! EspecialIy when you throw in the lucky dude as a call to action. Fuck yeah....It's your universe Sensai and I'm just a Peeping Tom passing through...NOT until I finish reading ALL your stories first!
The plot is too interesting.
Not that the sex is bad.
I'm just WAAAYYY more interested in the story.
Lol normally the sex is why I'm reading but I'm skimming over the sex scenes quickly so that I can get back to the main storyline. And I normally don't like sci fi....you're converting me. Great story, great writing, thank you for sharing!