All Comments on 'Daniel & I'

Intrracial incest. What a brilliant concept!. This debut story bears the promise of genius and there is not a shred of doubt in my mind that this author will be providing a lot of high quality erotica in the future.

Well written.

This being your first LIT submission is simply amazing.

I know I have a lot of work to do before mine are anywhere near ready for posting.

I do hope you continue posting here. You have an incredible talent and I for one can't wait to read something more from you.

I agree for you first story you did a great job!

Great first story. Really liked the story line. A 2nd chapter would be great. Maybe a happily-ever-after. They end up together, get married, maybe even her getting pregnant. Since they are not biologically related (although in a story/fantasy, it doesn't matter much) it would be nice to see a happy ending. Keep up the good work.

I like to get you in bed

Awesome story - I also think this deserves another chapter or two!

Great first story.

it could have been a good story IF it had been finished. half a story (and this is much less than half) is worse than no story at all. it would haveb been better if you waited to post this chapter when you had the rest ready as well. either finish it or delete it but don't leave it like this.

beautiful. Thank you.

If you're American, write like one, and if you're from England, write it as though you are. And one more thing; 19 year old's in Great Britain don't get into PhD programmes in University, they need a Bachelor's and a Master's first...

I love this kind of story that contains such love, understanding, and unbelieveably deep feelings for each other. I love the character development. do not listen or get disheartened by the responses who do not like this story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good story.

Really enjoyed it! The way you built the tension was masterful! Looking forward to more of your writing.