All Comments on 'Daniel Ch. 02: Jonathan's Wife and Daughter'

Very hot! But some of the wording seemed backward.(fat long cock - long fat cock?)

I wondered where you were taking this story at first but enjoyed the mother/daughter domination.

Just be careful with your grammar especially when it should have been too not two.

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An excellent premise for a story, you appear to have some grammatical problems, a dominant is a person, to dominate is the action of the dominant, some of your sentences read as if they were written in the late 18th/early 19th century by English writers of that era.