All Comments on 'Daniella Bound'

Fantastic read from start to finish! definately needs a sequel!

storyteller. Daniella Bound is rich in detail. Once again, you've managed to create sexy, smart, and likable characters. I was completely immersed in the fantasy. Thank you, Jaymal, for being such a great writer and for sharing your creative mind with Literotica readers.

I love all your stories.... This one was great.... got me wet and turned on.... keep it up ;-)

I loved this piece of work. Good pace, great images. Made me horny as hell.Too bad there isn't a way to rate the author and forego the stories! LOL

Utterly arousing story with interesting sex and interesting characters. Well done.

...that was nothing short of fantastic!! VERY well written, GREAT theme, easy to 'get into'.

Well done, Jaymal, congratulations! You've written the best story I've seen in a long time!

Almost flawless writing, characters and plot emerging naturally. The sex was a bit clinical, but it's clear that this was what you intended. I'm off to read more of your stuff....

You have a particular gift for description that I envy. LOVED the clear images of how Daniella was bound, denied, humiliated and forced to need Eric. In fact, I'm tempted to write another take on this story with a bit of a darker twist... ;)

Wonderful story, quite the zinger. And Hot. Very very hot.

...story. As it unfolds, we learn so much & then a twist...so much fun!

And I did enjoy the smut...very hot indeed! Wonderful use of his captive & a wonderful captive to use.

Thanks for sharing!

god, i want you to fuck me hard. my pussy is dripping wet.

I love the twist at the end...but mostly I love the developement of the Eric and Daniella's relationship. Can't wait to see how this weekend ends...

Exquisitely hot.

This story is sooooo hot!

xoxo, Penny

I read both Daniella Bound and Defiled.Eric was someone who gave Daniella the debasement she had needed since her rich father cut off her funds and she had to work as a commoner to get herself through college.Eric did not know that so the more nasty things he did her sexually and humiliated her,the more she used it to get off being used and abused!Eventually she told him her story and the fact she knew her father somehow had fucked him over.The sex and humiliation ended being the fucking hard reiease they both needed!!

Oh I did like this a lot, it had a lot of what 50 shades did not, SEX... and lots of good hard sex as well. Great story and am just going off to read the follow up..

My heart was thumping in my chest reading this story I absolutely loved it and the first one.

No wonder you won the 1st prize, well written and imaginative story, thank you.

You have a definite gift with your choice of words. they flowed so smoothly that I was captivated by your story from beginning to end. Well done!

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Your characters were great. Thank you for a sexy story. Please keep writing

Read the two stories and could hardly "put the book down", Lovely stories, well told.

He kicked her to the curb and the curb is where she stayed.

Enjoyed and look forward to more!

Absolutely brilliant. I loved every bit of this. Very erotic, and in a different league to other stories I have read on here and in ‘Black Lace’ books. You should get published!

Please write more!!!!

Thank you for brightening up my Saturday morning x

You should publish this story, it’s outstanding. 5 stars all the way.

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I hope that this continues. There is alot more to these characters and this story. Beautiful

Fantastic, well written, great descriptions, easy to visualize

Pretty fucking poor

overrated definitely

i have read your other stories you are genius at words,finer detailings ,characters inner termoils so why isnt this as exciting as your other stories

no complaints against eric though he is at his right /perfect place playing villian and then humiliating her by dumping her or just stopped at breaking into her mouth and pussy instead of tearing her asshole which was a blessing in disguise for the stupid cunt which she being a cunt doesnt realise

but the ending disapponited me

its the dump cunt daniella who ruined all in the ending

i dont like easy girls like daniella no fun nothing exciting stupid submissive

i like it when they fight back or play hard to get

its steamy raunchy scary but exciting

both of them doesnt wanna to give up but they both he will win at the end

he domimates she resist her best with giving him equal fight and challenge

i kinda liked her attitude that she said she knew he was just taking his revenge and she was ready to go till she gave in at the end

but this stupid whore served herself so easily on plate

look i am not asking for physical fighting or haipulling

yes he is a handsome dominating man tons of girls would come and he wont give a damn about running after him once shes gone

but but but

she is making it too easy for him

yes i want her to submit her to him but there must be some chase she make him to do and win her submission

this seems more like some light bondage noncon instead of bdsm

he has made his place in arousing her but still hasnt done anything yet to win her thrust

her submission seems too rushed

theres no challenge for him at all

she is just like any ordinary girl who came begging to his door after she got taste of his undeniable dominance on him

you are awsome at non con humiliation bringing out a slut out if the purest virgin sluts stories

but she is already a slut and already dating him he has surely broken her trust so he needs to earn it before proclaiming himself as a master

and the way he humiliated her by just asked her to leave doesnt seem convincing at all

if she is just a bit human (slut or not) she would have left played hard to get and he would had again seduced her broke her in his dungeon and devour her

just dont make the girl too dumb coz she seems undeserving for such a hot dominant guy

i think he deserves better than a brainless cunt like daniella

highly underqualified for someone as sexy as him even for revenge

sorry people its just my honest opinion

sorry for typos and grammer aint my thing so dont bother correcting

I adore that self-fueling spiral of rage, resentment, teasing, denial, and need; it reminds me a little of Sophie Morgan's work. Very hot, and very well-written; thank you!

OMG,!!!!!!! Fantastic