All Comments on 'Danny's All Grown Up Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hot as hell !

Think its time for Shelly to lube Danny's bum hole now .................

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Someone needs to get pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Just NO!

Gay anal crap NO!

Pookiebear123Pookiebear123almost 2 years ago

I am loving this series, particularly how you describe Danny’s cock. “Yogurt slinger” is my favorite. 😂😂😂

Winger534Winger534almost 2 years ago

Love this storyline! Tried to send Private Feedback but you don't allow it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A GREAT STORY!!!

Please continue telling us the adventures of Danny and his mom and aunt.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Skank Sisters and a piece of shit son. Hell of a family.

moonknight013moonknight013almost 2 years ago

fun story, need to have the aunt get her daughters to come visit and join the fun

dirtysondirtysonalmost 2 years ago

Awsome! Get them pregnant with his babies!!

dikupinyadikupinyaalmost 2 years ago
too bad

was going good until you had to shave their pussies! grown women should have some hair instead of looking like a pre-pubescent 7th grade girl. in my opinion. too bad you ruined it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Eventually each of the sisters MUST eat the other's creampie!!

dwr0242dwr0242almost 2 years ago

Love this story so far!! I hope there is more!!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 2 years ago

This was super hot but I had expected it to be longer than one page! Can we have a 4th chapter detailing the rest of the week? I'd love to see the two sisters fool around with each other as well. Five stars and a favorite point!

ManoBlueManoBluealmost 2 years ago

Make him a cooler he keeps doing nerd sh*t

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

dikupinya- one person's opinion. Many other's love a shaved cunt.

Anonymous- smart sisters that know young cock is the way to go. Son who knows two experienced MILF's are the way to get lots of experience and attention.

Grendel22- keep up the great work.

JDx1213JDx1213almost 2 years ago

I hope his cousins make a surprise visit.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 2 years ago

No depth other than the sex. You had the opportunity along the way to expand the story foundation but didn't take it. If you do another chapter, take the time to explain how the characters got where they are. Why is Danny an only child? Readdressing my comment for 2, there's no mention of marital problems yet there's no guilt by Danny or Ali. What's up with that? I get Shelly and Danny based on your setup to them, but the mom doesn't flow with what you gave us. Probably best to end series here unless you fill in the gaps. You could have them end the day with a "we all need to talk" discussion that could reveal the backstory. Maybe the dad is having an affair, maybe his work trip isn't what it seems and he's meeting his mistress somewhere, things like that. There's also the obvious thing like birth control for Ali. (Shelly was single, so likely on it.) Did father have a vasectomy? 3*

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticalmost 2 years ago

I loved this third chapter although I would have liked it to be longer. I'd like the story to continue with at least one more chapter in which we could find out that Ali's husband is cheating on her so she divorces him and Danny ends up living with his mother and aunt as his de facto wives.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

If sisters like to share, I think Shelly must get her daughters to come visit, and they will do a surprise visit during the fun.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

MORE PLEASE cousins need to catch them and then dad come home early and finds them all

BassNutt51BassNutt51almost 2 years ago

Great story, I really like your writing. Please keep posting, it's much appreciated. This is a straight hot sexy story and leaves you wanting more I didn't see any mistakes or I could have been too involved in the story to notice, lol. Thanks again for writing 👍😜

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What an awesome story there's no words that can express it just AWESOME!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very nice story so much sex it carried on and on. Loved how Aunt Shelly seduced him and then he wore her out, and then Shelly got his mother involved. You need to write more and bring the twin cousins in. Gave it 5

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB9 months ago

Very unbelievably good 👍

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I was pretty young, but the first porno I ever saw was Taboo II. It definitely had an effect on me. I though the sister was hot as hell, but it was really Honey Wilder that just did it for me. And then I saw the first Taboo and the third. The thought of having an older wom...

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