All Comments on 'Danville Divorced Bitches Club Ch. 02'

Oh, ach an sgeulachd seo rinn mi cho toilichte! Tha mi a 'faireachdainn làidir feum a shuathadh mo Bod, ach seo tha mi air nach eil fhathast a dhèanamh. Chan urrainn dhomh a dhèanamh mi-fhìn cofhurtail leis a 'smaoineachadh air fucking fhìn Mam, ach urrainn dhomh smaoineachadh air cuid mhath tiugh broilleach na h-Alba mnathan, seadh, a dh'fhaodadh a bhith às dèidh a' faicinn gu 'm beag freckled ruadh briogais Fhrangach ma bha mi fhìn a-mhàin a thoirt seachad an cothrom. 'S urrainn dhomh innse sibh airson cuid, bidh mi fhìn an dèidh jollying math aon uair a gheibh mi dhachaigh,' smaoineachadh Deirdre Machlain, an t-saill busty màthair trì de chompanaich dhomh innse dhomh pumpa bheag agam a-steach MacArthur dhearg aice Celtic preas. Faodaidh iad a 'ghabhail ar briogaisean air falbh, ach faodaidh iad a-riamh a ghabhail ... ar saorsa!

He sits there and watches his mom get pounded into the couch and he cums in his pants? Why do you people write these 18 year olds as scairdy cats and pussy's?

I'm glad you asked. It is the use of a literary device called "enlisting pathos." I tend to use it in each story I write to one degree or another. Perhaps I overuse it? I'll give it some thought. I hope you liked the rest of the story. Part 3 should be published tomorrow. Over that one and the next few, you will see Ricky develop into a real man. Enjoy.

Incredible...!!! * 5 * stars