All Comments on 'Daphne'

Don't try to be what everyone wants ... if you don't know what you want yourself.

Very lovely first time story!

I gave it a five even though Daphne would have realistically wanted a couple of dates with Kip before being intimate with him. Her actions don't match up with her confession. The happily ever after ending redeemed that error.

However, I just got to ask everyone who reads this...does Kip happen to remind you of Jim Dodge from Career Opportunities? Does Daphne seem to be inspired by Josie McClelland? The antics of Frank Whaley really ruined that movie, but I still watch it over and over for Jennifer Connelly. I've had a huge crush on her ever since I saw her in Labrynth. She was absolutely gorgeous in The Rocketeer too. Even at 51, she's still very easy on the eyes.

Of course you better wrap the story up. She's naked, in bed, and waiting for you. Better get with it!!!

Went from zero to 100 in record time