All Comments on 'Darcy and Daddy'

it started out ok but quickly became so poor, take a break before attempting another story

Thanks for the feedback I guess I would ask you why you felt that way but you are "anonymous" so it is what it is

i enjoyed it, maybe some editing to fix some small errors, otherwise it was hot

Absolutely loved it, you had me squirming in my seat as I read it, thank you :-)

No man on earth says this -

"Open for me Darcy let Daddy taste his Babygirl's sweet mouth," I said.

- referring to himself as Daddy when talking to his 28 year old daughter! Awful, childish dialogue.

Have you ever been told if you can't say something nice don't say anything at all? You don't like the story cool dont read it. However if you want to criticize at least do it objectively and not by being a total douche bag and then have to hide behind the whole "anonymous" thing when you run your mouth. It's fantasy not reality it doesn't have to be something a "real" person will say isn't that the whole point of fantasy is it not being real. No not everyone is gonna like it but seriously I have read worse.

And as for the "more Daddy babygirl crap" what exactly did you think it was going to be in this category with the title Darcy and daddy? I mean why even read it when you have that attitude to begin with? Or do you do it just to be an ass?

The dirty talk was on point, but it would be nice with more commas and full stops.

Side note: Daddy here looking for Littles or submissives. Girls preferred, mostly sex. (Never got the message back last time.)

5'3" and 210lbs is not "curvy". That's whale-like.

Fat bitch Darcy was more desperate for a man than an education so now she breeds off her father!!