by honeywldcat
for a romance story. But I guess you're trying something different! :) Still, all's good
Nice start to the story. Leaves you wanting more. Keep up the good work.
great first segment. hope to read more soon. when love hits that hard even a seal is putty.
Really looking forward to the next installment of this story to see what happens. Excellent story in every way. Great job.
It was so funny and cute! I loved it! Can't wait for the next part, hurry!
this story has me laughing myself silly, please continue, loving it so far
loving the start of this one, love how they all back each other up, and i like the fact that you didn't have a sex scene in the first chapter, but lots of tension! can't wait for more! great stuff