All Comments on 'Dark and Stormy Night'

I like the start and see the possibilities. I'm not sure where the romance is going to fit in. I think of romance as getting to know each other and dating as such. Shared experiences and building love, but they are on a ranch on a muddy road. I have not been disappointed in your other stories so I will continue reading. I'm sure you will work this into a romance. Thanks for your time and imagination.

If he could only get his car fixed, he'd be in great shape!

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Maybe in First Time it fit better. But now it is crying for another part. I hope you put one out soon.

Chapter 2 please! AAA++