All Comments on 'Dark City Ch. 01'

hmmm, interesting case, interesting characters.

Shan, the defense attorney living with the Jim, Homicide cop in an open, unmarried, kinky relationship. and now Jim's ex-wife has been murdered ritualisticly. looking forward to more.

where will this go?

Just like Television. Keep 'em guessing! Damn good start.

Hope you can continue this more on a daily basis than a monthly one! Even weekly serials used to bug me.

I am really curious why anyone would kill your ex if they are out to bug you. Might cut your alimony payments.

But this could be 1 of a string of senseless murders, too.

This seems like the start of an interesting series. It is well written and has some clever little phrases scattered throughout. Bring us more!!!

Interesting beginning that hooks the reader. Any influence by the movie of same name? Definitely like the sex noir feel, and look forward to reading more.

Waste of time - Unfinishe