All Comments on 'Dark Moon Ch. 12'

that was a very good closing for the for the first part of the story, it doesn't really matter how often u post the chapters as long as u do.

Looking forward to the followup stories. Good job. Please keep them coming. Very good story.

this is nice. :) their security with love for each other.... awesome!!! is this the end? :) hahahaha.

i will miss your postings... i think u should get a new laptop...try the new apple. :)

i enjoyed your story. i am sure i will enjoy the other 2. keep it coming. i know i want it fast but i guess i just have to wait. :( anyways, do not stop writing ok? :)

I am looking forwad to the next story. Wow!!! I am also happy about Passion and Josh being able to be together. Keep it coming Please!!!!!!!!!

I think this is the best chapter I've read so far. It shows that they are happy even though the bad things happen yet. Keep doing what you're doing and I think it everything will come out great.