All Comments on 'Dark Planet Pt. 03'

Thank you again and please keep writing!

Very original idea, and well written too. I just discovered this series and read them all from the start. I hope there's more to come soon!

The chapter was great! I read it and reread it:)And I truelly, deeply love it:) So, Jayn will show her ability to generate a huge amounts of energy through orgasm? I am sure the soldiers will be in love with her after that demonstration:) Perikos is now the 'owner' of the only one rechargeable source of feeding in the Empire - will the neutral tribes try to join him in order to get to the source? And the spy? If the spy is the Second in Command why will he need a common soldier to tell him a data of the situation? And what about the soldier Jayn saved? Is she going to wander around naked or? Update:)

Jayn the telepath! Cool. Jayn the only human in an orgy comprised of hungry aliens - maybe not so cool. Good luck Jayn!

After a long period of waiting for the continuation of your story it is a real, sweet treat to be able to read so much more in such a short time period! Please continue and I hope to read more of Jayn and Perikos's adventures^^