All Comments on 'Dark Reasons Ch. 05-06'

Still interesting. Can't wait to read more.

why is she allowed to bring him everywhere? Cops would never allow civilians into a crime scene. Really good though i loved it, i am a big fan. P.S. i think that ethan and Jenna should be together.

Maybe Ethan won't be allowed in at all. Or maybe because of his medical expertise, they would let him in as a civilian consultant. We'll see next chapter. I'm enjoying this budding relationship! Thanks for writing!

For once I actually have some neg - um - constructive feedback for you.

"She finally decided upon a simple black knit dress, sleeveless with a deep scope neck and short hemline that made the best out of Jenna's considerable attributes."

"Jenna's considerable attributes" just doesn't feel right here. I feel that it would be better to use "her considerable attributes", and if necessary substitute Jenna for "She" at the start of this paragraph ("Jenna finally decided"), or for "her" in the previous paragraph ("A serious case of stress and too much coffee had Jenna's nerves jumping").

Still, a great chapter!