All Comments on 'Dark Redemption Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic

This is a fantastic beginning to what can be a very erotic story. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
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there are alot of spelling errors and just bad writing in the first few paragraphs that make this hard to read at first ...

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