All Comments on 'Dark Side of the Force Ch. 03'

I'm enjoying your stories. Strange but it seems to remind me a lot of what is going on today in the real world in this country. No body seems to give a damn. The corruption is unbelievable. Look at the IRS investigation for example. Anyway it'll be interesting to see how the Iron Crowbar handles Nathan Hale and Henry Wargrave along with the dirty SBI people. Sometimes you have to fight fire with fire. Keep up the good work the stories are interesting.

Another good chapter. Couple of tiny issues re proofreading but nothing sinister.

Didn’t see Malone dropping out of the race. I thought that Danial wife’s Melina extreme dislike of blacks would pop up near the election day.

*****Thanks for sharing.