All Comments on 'Dark Tales. The Vet. Ch. 02'

love a good vengance story where the wronged party ends up happy in the end. the only thing that could have made it better is if he sent some of the videos to his ex wife's new husband!

An Excellent story

Well done!

Definitely a complicated affair, a fast reader though. Held my interest through out, very well written. Thanks for the good story

...and some more explaining needed for this part(how did he get Julian's mom's maiden name,how did half a million pounds become 900 thousand,what did he have left over after buying vet biz,since it would not cost that much if it was as small as portrayed)-and Harry may take issue with his going back to the biz if he was so scared of being discovered but what the hey-pistolpackinpete

The first chapter was more fun, but this was smooth. My name is not Harry but I do feel that Ireland would not let him practice without a lot of formal activities which would involve his presenting his diploma. Or did he dig himself a deeper hole buying a false diploma??? Oh well I would have enjoyed following in more detail the courtship of Maureen.

enjoyed the story

So If you go to the Forum, select the Story Feedback sub forum and look for the thread "The Vet by torchthebitch"

You did carry off the revenge but you also saw the cost. Good story thanks for the read.

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It was a good story. All's well when ends well. Thanks for sharing.

Frankly, I thought at first that the revenge was a little overdone and impossible to excape the consequences from. However, you did it, and made him suffer the results of his actions. Well done and thanks! - Ttom

A very good and well written story. You should feel proud you were able to write something of this quality.

Thanks for submitting the chapters so close together.

and felt the story lost the brilliant nasty originality of part1. Love a good revenge story, but in this case you hurried it and it's obviously been done better, in the same vein. As my fellow commenter says below, great to have the sequel so quickly. Maybe too quickly though, at the expense of the tale. Sláinte...Mancelt.

If there is to be extra marital sex in a marriage, there must be great trust in the love between the two and complete honesty as to the when and where of the daliences.

Without that trust and honesty, he had all the reason in the world to screw with them.

You wrote great second chapter in my opinion and I like the way that he was able to find love again. I also like the way you were able to show that his ex-wife Janet and her lover Julian got what was coming to them for their affair. I also enjoyed how he was able to rebuild his life and become a veterinarian again.

There were a few typos and grammatical errors but in general it was not badly written. It flowed very smoothly. It would appear that our "hero" has grown from his experiences, and the resolution made some sort of logical sense. Thanks for writing.

Far more better than what I expected.

You're a better man than I am. When I wrote My Michelle Ch.4, I killed the guy in detail. In real life, in your situation, I probably would have offed them both.

Interesting and entertaining. A very enjoyable story. Please keep them coming.

Read this twice. Enjoyed more the second time than the first one. The lead character is well developed. Actions are understandable. Would have enjoyed more about Janet but what the heck - it was good

you would write beautfully well. Please don't stop.

This is one of wonderful sagas that keeps drawing you into the story farther and farther. Great revenge story.

Are you really a German? Got relatives in my country? Sweinehund !

He knows what he likes and what he does not! R.T.

Only four because the ex-wife was still alive or at least didn't loose her private parts to rott. Cheaters should suffer very very painfully, so I think she still got off easy. So only 4 stars

I believe the too improbably and probably impossible to deserve such a high rated. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it enough to give it the highest rating.

Thanks for the escape from the daily grind of life!! Alittle more description of Ireland would have been nice for this Canadian reader! :)

Thanks for sharing.

I just wish Janet could have suffered a little more; prison time or more sickness. She even found a new soon-to-be unwilling cuck to marry.

James found enough happiness in the end to make up for Janet's leniency.

Great story.

Don't cheat.

I am glad the divorce family law institute is in Irland, but the 4 years too long. The Irish people should have easier divorce law practice................

Annoying the HUSBAND HATERS he found a good Second Chance. I am glad the Second Chance is not a widow or a single but a divorcee. Thank you Author for your choice.

A little Modern Figaro Type Revenge at the middle and the cheating exwife got a Second Chance after her hell trip. I could hope she will reform herself.

I would have written 2 children for him and 1-2 for his cheaiting exwife as well. I am a benevolent eternal optimistic REVENGE STORY FAN.

How I'm just discovering this great story. I love the revenge aspect. Plus you write really well. A rarity in these parts. Can't wait to check out more of your stories.

revenge and a good life with a loving woman, who could ask for more. really great story

to the widower she is gonna marry would have been nice... 5*

This story seemed to have been well thought out and great logic in the plots. Of course, there were plausibility issues but the novelty of the characters and the author's skilled writing balanced things to make it a five star read. The details were phenomenal and very interesting. Thank you for your effort!

A well written story that had a lot of English and Irish flavor. So much so, that I almost forgot I was reading a cheating wife story! It is a great example of how important it is to CHOOSE your life rather than just let it happen to you.

I didn't understand it all, but the outcome was what I was hoping for. I wish them well.

Hopefully Learn. TK U MLJ LV NV

I also liked the 'no sex' it made a nice change. Thank you. 5*

Part 2 seemed a bit tedious and dull. No drama or personality clash. Resolution that came about through a final meeting would have been much more interesting, I think.

and wonderful to see the use of the'Oirish' names again ! Loved it !!

Keep writing & well done to you,Author.

Glad he got away with it.

I like nice, neat little packages with all loose ends tied up in a bow. As opposed to your "Overwatch." (Grimace)

And with Maureen O'Hara too! God! What a stunning woman.

bit short i thought, would have benefitted from more detail.

Either his ex-wife and her lover were fools or the Cops were fools. Wifey didn't press charges? Why not? They assumed he was dead? That seemed like a real reach, even for fiction. And then the song and dance with the drugs made absolutely no sense. Not a bad story, but there were some huge gaps.

I could have done without some of the details, but there is no limit to the extreme behavior caused by betrayal. The world is a brutal hostile place and our spouses are often our only refuge, having vows witnessed. Story has the ring of truth throughout..

But very good.

Their are those who said they wanted Janet punished more. She got plenty of punishment for screwing around. These people who want more are real women haters. She lost everything and had to basically settle for a live beneath her education and looks. With who knows what life that is. Plus she is broke . How much more can you do to a person who screwed up her marriage. Divorce the bitch and move on!

A very good story with a.happy ending for Seamus. Can't ask for more than that.

Great story, 5*s!

One missing detail. The errant couple had trench foot of the genitals, you said that. Was the necrosed tissue removed? I believe that was the goal from Chapter 1.

You wrote: no permanent damage... My bad.

Would have liked a little more hand wringing, breast beating and teeth gnashing “woe is me” from Janet’s POV but, that’s just me! I thought both chapters had very smooth flow. Good one.

Only drawback

Good story, loved the Irish connection.

"Nobody can hate like an Irishman!" - Sea Flynn 'The Wild Geese'

The double standard in favor of women is alive and well on both sides of the pond. One man gets twenty years, the other gets ten, but the woman only got a suspended sentence. If feminists were truly interested in equality, they would push the courts to ensure that women receive the same punishments for their crimes!

ZK

Stupid misogynist anon below is crying about feminists because of a make believe story. And some folks wonder why I refer to so many as knuckle draggers and mouth breathers. Talk about fragile little snowflakes who just have to find outrage in something made up. Let me guess "He won the election" right? Thats about your speed kid.

As for the story, it ended up being too pat and everything tp easily falling right into place. I little less like striking gold would have served the story better.

Happy ending for almost everyone. Janet ended up much better than she deserved.

What a great fantasy! Thanks.

Ed

A very nice read, well thought out.

Good story line, and proofing. Editing your work is imperative. Keep writing.

XYZ

Sorry this revenge was juvenile and for him personally got him nothing. I mean seriously what he kept 5k pounds wow great revenge

This story points out how our MC underestimated his powers of persuasion. With what he did to his wife and her paramour was truly off the top and a bit extreme. But he didn't kill them and their own less than honorable pursuits punished them even more than our MC did. A little dark but a well written story and an understanding and forgiving woman he was fortunate to find.5 stars

1 star - violence always gets a single star rating - waste of time

I think your writing is good, real good.5 stars from me

Well done, liked it and it was real. These things DO happen.

Didn't bring charges on him?

Well, she’d better not cheat on him. I suggest she call Janet, first.