All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 03'

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SuvorovskayaSuvorovskayaover 10 years ago
Great Story

So far so good, keep up the awesome story. This is definitely a great series in the making and is one of the things that makes this site so awesome.

Hethen129Hethen129over 10 years ago
yep

The previous poster said it. But the one page chapters are killing me lol. But aside from that there is a tale here that can rival even Damon horn blade

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Longer please

This story has me hooked. Despite the lack of sex, the gritty fighting, hidden plots and the cat-girl. The writing is great and is keeping me hooked despite the length. The only thing disappointing is the length of individual chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
keep it up

The story is great, do keep going. I also agree about the one page chapters, are killing me.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 6 years ago
3 years UNFINISHED stop now.

3 years UNFINISHED stop now.

It's only about half complete, of that. So after a 3 year halt to progress there is no hope.

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