All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 05'

i like ur tale......but in my opinion you should've combined the first 5 chapters together into one .......would've made it much better to read. too small chapters tend to send the reader away waiting......n there r a lot of other stories we can read.

But have to agree with Wolf chapters are far too short

Yes the chapters are a bit short but do not be put down and do not feel pressured! I personally love your stories and I don't find many stories that can make me cheer and laugh,this one however? I cheered and laughed so much that my friend asked what in the world I was reading. Just do what you think is best and ignore any nay sayers.

Five stars for this one. I didn't rate the others so high 'cause of too much writing about the unimportant.

This one was good.

I hope I'm not disappointed by the next chapter.

Nice series; please try to make your chapters longer. Too long and its dull, too short and its childish with diminished intrigue.

I don't typically comment until I finish a story but this chapter was wonderful. I am more into the story and tend to skim over the other parts. It is hard to find really good writing on here but you did it with this chapter at least. We will see how the rest of the story goes. Thank you for your efforts.

JC

3 years UNFINISHED stop now.