All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 11'

While the killing off of many characters like Cook, Lirena, and the Guard Captain was unsettling, the adventure of this story is definitely worth it.

Worst chapter till date in this series.Hope the next chapter is better.

So, devilslayer of Eragon....Worst chapter because....whhyyyyyy?

Here's a lesson your kindergarten teacher should've taught you, if your mom didn't:

You can "hope" the next is better, but if you just belch out "worst evar!!" at the 11th hour, and nothing more, you not won't get what your crybaby self wants, but you look like a fool pouting with his lower lip out in the process.

But then, discussion...coherent thought....you don't have it.

Only because it seems like Cook is gone. I'm holding out hope that at least the more 'enriched' servants (personality-wise) survived somehow.

Please make your chapters longer. I am just getting into your tale again and then it is over. I like your writing though.Thanks.

I have to apologise to you for the comment I made on chapter 10. I might have been a bit too harsh. But, the shock of what happened got to me. I said on my comment What Have You Done! and How Could You! When I look back I realise it was one of the best chapters so far. And I will definately keep on reading.

I loved this chapter a lot too, and can't wait for chapter 12. :)

i have read stories on this site for 3 years now...and this is the best story so far....really wicked sex ...especially the ones with the female leads nightly trysts with strangers...you have some wicked imagination FS86...keep it up!!

Dear observer7,

I didn't know that fs86 had an attorney on this site.If he had any issues HE should have taken it up with me.Not U.