All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 18'

I like how you have a main plot, but you don't rush to it. Please maintain your story pace, it makes it feel more real...

Enjoyed this chapter a lot. Looking forward to chapter 19. :)

I'd been wondering about that 'master' thing, given her otherwise fiercely independent personality, but that cleared it right up.

I'm actually sorta surprised I didn't come to that conclusion myself, given all the stories I read on here -- it's a common-enough idea, to the point where it should probably be a trope. (Assuming it isn't; which I'm probably wrong about.)

(Mind you, a trope isn't a bad thing -- just a device used in conveying fictional stories. Unless you don't like browsing a site for hours on end. Then a trope is a bad thing, if it's tvtropes.)