by Metal_Monkey
I've never commented before -- I just browse -- but I just had to say that this was well-written, interesting, AND sexy. If you write anything else, I'm there.
Well written with an arousing emphasis on detail... do finish the tale - would love to read the rest.
I loved this story. Exquisite detail, no rambling or trailing off, well written, a good explaination that gives you insight on how she, and sometimes he feels..Very good job.
Definitely one of the best fantasy and short fics on the site. The the way you write is sensual and very descriptive - without overdoing it. You have to write some more! I notice that you wrote this a while back. Loved the characters and the mystery involved. And that the vampire is supposed to come back - there has to be a sequel! Thanks for this great piece.