by dirtycupcake
Learn how to proof read before entering the story. The glaring mistake of using "come" rather than "cum" for a reference to orgasm/semen/etc is unacceptable and found only by proof reading.
Thank you. (and please ignore the ignoramous above: you write well)
Thank you Scotsman, I will definitely ignore. I have no qualms of how other people spell that particular word, however I am not 15 and choose to spell it correctly. But to the others, thank you for reading!! Hopefully I will have more soon as inspiration hits me!!
Because
Three people together is Group
Restraints and Dominance is BDSM
another person, without the permission, performing sex acts on her
is at best Reluctance at worst Non Con
Leaving out all reference to these activities in Tags is manipulative
(really? one word - date - ?)
Any one of these categories alone or together are often NOT Erotic to many readers
And to list this story as Erotic Coupling sets up many of us for a very bad experience!!!
This story is very well written. The dialogue and descriptions are top notch.