All Comments on 'Date Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Whew

Hot, hot , hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Proof read proof read

Learn how to proof read before entering the story. The glaring mistake of using "come" rather than "cum" for a reference to orgasm/semen/etc is unacceptable and found only by proof reading.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 13 years ago
Deliciously arousing.

Thank you. (and please ignore the ignoramous above: you write well)

dirtycupcakedirtycupcakealmost 13 years agoAuthor
Anonymous ignored

Thank you Scotsman, I will definitely ignore. I have no qualms of how other people spell that particular word, however I am not 15 and choose to spell it correctly. But to the others, thank you for reading!! Hopefully I will have more soon as inspiration hits me!!

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
Is the Category deliberately deceptive?

Because

Three people together is Group

Restraints and Dominance is BDSM

another person, without the permission, performing sex acts on her

is at best Reluctance at worst Non Con

Leaving out all reference to these activities in Tags is manipulative

(really? one word - date - ?)

Any one of these categories alone or together are often NOT Erotic to many readers

And to list this story as Erotic Coupling sets up many of us for a very bad experience!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Really excellent

This story is very well written. The dialogue and descriptions are top notch.

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