All Comments on 'Date Night: Halloween Party'

Written by a twelve year old???????

11 yr old is more like it. Utter rubbish!

Just develop some of your scenes more and it would have been a lot hotter.

Ignore anonymous asshole comments!

Ignore the negatives it was the dogs b------s for me

Only a twelve year old would think to add that many question marks at the end of a sentence, but that's just my opinion.

I think it's a wonderful story. And it's perfect for the season as well!

Very good stories on their own, but there seems to be a very big gap between the carnival, and the halloween party. Secondly in the first chapter Jenny is the girlfriend who cheated not a sister.

nothing like 1st story disapointing

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About whores. 1 star

That was pathetic and I struggle to even finish while being sorry I did.