All Comments on 'Date Night with My Wife'

I am not a grammar Nazi, but you have one miss print after another. You really need an editor for this and to help with the story development, How dark can a bar be that he could clearly see his wife jerking somebody off, but no one else could?

anyone who complains but hasn't posted has not posted.

i am interested in what other stories you want to tell... keep them coming

Loved your story. As a married man I enjoyed hearing a story of another. Keep'em coming (no pun intended 😏)

Call in an editor, STAT! Not a bad story, but it's impossible to maintain continuity and keep the reader following the story with so many errors! Clean it up, please.

This was a awesome story cant wait for more

Semi-literate drivel.

'heals' Wrong. It's 'heels'.

'shear'. Wrong. It's 'sheer'.

I won't go on. I'd be here all day.

Nicely told story. Would like to read more.

The need for editing has already been commented on.

The thought of my wife stroking another man’s cock while sitting at the bar……Well,I think she’d enjoy a cock in each hand although that may be to obvious at the bar. I also enjoy bending my wife over a car hood and slapping her thick ass as I pound myself into her. I’m not aware of anyone ever watching tho.