by Kindasortacrazy
I think what's lacking ,is longer chapters,to get to the story.
It took one chapter to get her in the bedroom,
I hope it dosent take another one, for her to just get out of it.
Can't wait for the next crumb,..seriously I love this story!
and I like her spirit. So far I like him as well. I wonder if there others will have as much personality? I think the pace of the chapters is okay, as long as you update regularly.
I'm hooked. Would love longer chapters that allow for more character development.
Please continue. Great plot. I feel like its a breath of fresh air compared to the usual demon/human stories. Can't wait for the next chapter
A strong story set in a rich and imaginitive fantasy world with vivid charachters made this an enjoyable read.
Great story. I'm finding Darien's 'niceness' a bit discomforting, waiting for the 'true demon' to come out.
Well done in the writing and character development!
Sexy demons... hmmmm..... I so like your story. On to the next chapter!!! :D