All Comments on 'Dating Lessons'

Great writing. Loved it!

Usually, first stories need polish, but yours was excellent!

Thank you! I have more in the works :)

Some stories include much repetition and irrelevant detail. This one was perfect for me, today.

And then.... ?

Your writing - not only the grammar, spelling, and punctuation, but the style and flow of it... It's rare, and treasured. Especially in a world full of inexperienced writers and jumbled thoughts. You put time and effort into this (and if you didn't, you're more so a natural at this than the usual!), and it's appreciated so much!

Onto the story...... Wow. What a great one! A slow build up (compared to, “They banged, end of story.”), steamy, well thought out characters... Michael is a (pardon me, I'm not usually quite so expressive!) wet dream come to literary life. Gentle, driven, and protective, he's written as one would think of a good leader, which is something I'm always on the lookout for. Jeanette seems just as innocent as Michael calls her out to be (babe in the woods), and it's so sweet to watch him woo her with his "practice date" idea. All in all, loved it! It may go into my list of rereads. 😉