by laurasfox
What a pleasant surprise! I love your series and this one has a promising beginning!
Ms. Laurasfox, you have captured my full attention. This well written first chapter seems to offer what promises to be a very intriguing story. I'm very much looking forward to following this slightly odd but extremely likable young man through his journey here. This was a wonderfully descriptive beginning. Can't wait to find out where all of this is going. A ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ chapter #1 added to favorites and following to make sure I don't miss any of this.
Damn! That's a nice story! I can't believe i read the first chapter so soon after it was published. I wish more chapters to come soon......
Great start and I’m glad you have taken the time and initiative to deal with this challenging issue. Missy and Hudson are great people to enter his life as the risk to naive Otis begins. I wonder why Otis thinks he is so ugly when no one else?