All Comments on 'Daughter Holds the Keys Ch. 02'

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sp9983sp9983almost 4 years ago
Locked up

What kind of world is that?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Interesting concept

A very new twist - nice job!

CorzineCorpsCorzineCorpsalmost 4 years ago
Wow

Locked up for masturbating and it seems as if woman are the dominant gender in this Orwellian recreation of society. All of these laws against men would be struck down by the courts before they see the light of day but it's just a fictional story.

ModsognirModsogniralmost 4 years ago

I normally don't enjoy male chastity stories very much, since they tend to be a bit over the top. But this one is really great, I hope you can continue it. Thank you very much for writing it.

jeremy5028jeremy5028almost 4 years ago
Love it

Definitely gonna keep an eye on this story. Love the pacing and characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

amazing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very good

Keep them coming :-) Looking forward to the next chapters....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved It

Awesome story! Man that part with the guy who managed to get out only to be caught at the last second. I'd love to hear about his trial! I'm a fan of PF Dee's stories as well so I'm really glad to see a new author making stories like this. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hope to see the third part

Please, don't disappear

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic Story

I just keep coming and checking for part three

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Part 3 please

Waiting in chastity for the rest.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

so where is the wife and why are the girls living with him good story would have liked some intro

lukeey90lukeey90over 3 years ago
Too much feminism

Not bad it just there's too much drama and humiliation for males

RamanujRamanujabout 3 years ago

I am leaking badly, my god.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow This series just keeps getting HOTtER!

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