All Comments on 'Daughter-in-law Ch. 02: The Initiation'

Way to short to be anything but passing interest. The writing is good with a little character development to help it along but where is the husbands angst? At the least the two chapters should be combined into one chapter, otherwise we will be treated to a story coming to us in drips rather than a steady pour.

Can’t wait for next chapter!! Loving it so far....

It gets over even before it has started, at least combine 1st and 2nd chapter. Other wise it’s a good story; it’s just you need to make them longer.

Poor approach.. Had a good potential but made it all bit too quick.. She should have taken time to seduce him.. Or the son could have done stuff to create more circumstances for his father and wife..

When will we get chapter 3, loving the story and want to see how far it goes.

I appreciate and will try to accommodate your suggestions. You understand this is my first attempt at writing. :)

Third chapter coming up soon...

Are you still going to post chapter 3

3 part please