by Jimbojambo987
Gave you 4 stars as the story has a lot of potential , if you do continue please get a proofreader/editor.
Thanks for sharing
" do I continue."
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You don't know whether or not to continue your own story? If that's your stance, no!
Excellent storyline, great overall writing, Hoping to read more on this, Wondering how you will connect them, hopefully in a playful and respected connection. Thanks for sharing.
What a great story. I hope that there is a chapter 2 coming soon. Well done 5-Stars
Why would you not continue, your highest rated story, and the playfulness is great