All Comments on 'Daughter of Undark Ch. 1'

Witches, Spells, and other mayhem takes place when four Trick or Treaters show up at Kelli's Door. Happiness quickly turns to Terror when she finds out what they're up to.

Congratulations, and good luck in the contest!

FtF

This reads like a fairy tale on acid, which I hope is the effect you are going for. If not, then...oops. :D

A lucid dream? The kind where everything seems chillingly real, and the person wakes and wakes and is still trapped in this other world? You gave me goosebumps, Ravi.

leave me cold, but this was much better than usual. Good luck in the contest for this very original effort!

Good luck with the contest.

Fusionnée

(Abs and Vana)

wow i really enjoyed that. good job!