All Comments on 'Daughter of Ziva Ch. 01'

This is interesting. I want to read more

Great writing. Very descriptive. Can't wait to read more.

Looking forward to more!

it seems very interesting, but please please please don't let her actually submit!!!!! please let her kick his ass!!!!! even if he does rape her, even if she feels "pleasure" from it, please let her kill him or at least maim him and put him in his place! please!!!!!!!!!! don't let it become a BDSM or a "magic dick" story, please...................

Interesting start to the story! A lot of grammar and spelling that could use some combing through, but nothing too glaring to take away from the story. Good start!

What a childish unreal masculine fantasy totally devoid of even the remotest inkling of females.

A young woman watches her family being needlessly slaughtered, she tries to kill the attacker, who strangles her until she passes out. So ignoring her anger, her hatred her sorrow, her mourning, her grieving the over riding feeling she has is randiness. She just gets turned on by the whole situation. Really. is that the best plot you can come up with?