All Comments on 'Daughter Takes a Ride'

Hello,Capricorn62.

Nice story, but I have read similar ones before .

I was disappointed that in your biography,you are not even willing to say whether you are male or female

U need to fix these errors its hard to read with them

not only does dad stay asleep while his cock is taken out, but sleeps through a fuck, and getting his dick put away...then ficks brother in cat same night...no one speaks....makes it seem like first time,,.where did it all come from

Poorly written and really a far-fetched story. Wish I had read the comments before I read the story. Had I, I would not have even taken the time to read this fairy-tale.

So many spelling and grammer mistakes, that it was difficult to understand in some paths.

I gave you 5 stars if only for the courage to write a story in you non-native language. I really love "sitting on lap" stories, and you did a good job with this one.

Great story!.I love lap stories too. Some minor mistake, but still good english.

Are you joking me? You are anonymous, I don`t know if you are a male or female, why should I tell?

I´m sorry if I miss-spell somewhere. If I did some grammatical faults, please point them out, so my next story can be better

Love sexy incest stories and I def miss my teenage years banging my older sis on a very regular basis! She is married now and it doesn't happen any more but was heaven back then! After she moved out I ended up making a move on mom. Didn't end as well but we had some hot fun!

Girl to have father's as well brother's cock in car ride on same day.

Please get someone to edit your work. It could be a good story if the grammar wasn’t so bad. It should also be a bit longer with more details. I really like where you were going with it.

Stupid slut. What a shock. I'm glad this is fiction.