All Comments on 'Daughters Compete For Attention'

Nice start. Let daddy take the girls individually a couple of times. Then the menage e trois. Thanks.

Way to go for a start, just too short...... time for Daddy to enjoy them!

Next installment, switch parts and have the older sister show her pert little titties and the little sister show her picture perfect ass.... notch up the competition...we suspect Dad will eventually get them both, but let them compete, like they did this first episode, in front of each other and in steps... remember it's one thing to have Daddy get all hard and have to go jack off...it's entirely different for him to touch....maybe THAT can be chapter 3?? NOT too short at all...nice pace....

Cheers!

I love it, and look forward to the next chapters

Can't wait to see who goe's next.

Being a writer myself I can really appreciate how you did this story. Competition was a very smart idea, though one thing i saw was that it moved to fast.

Again, it was a great story. Keep up the good work. -Aeonsun

Let's get the next one out there

Can't wait to see what happens next

One of the better stories I have read on here

2 years and no update? Yet another author who had a great concept yet failed to finish what wouldve been a good story.

You have just written another story PLEASE go back and finish the one about the sisters.

Periods go inside the quotations. I can't believe you missed all of that.

follow it up man, this is good

and their adorable little coochies to choose from. And it's two lucky daughters who've got their father's fat veiny daddy-dick to stuff and pound their cute little cunts.

Well he's a better man than me, lol! After the spill and shirt removal I'd have been like... "You girls both know I love you more than anything, right? ...but someone needs to fuck me, and I mean like right now! Hell, who am I kidding, you both need to fuck me right now! Everyone to daddy's room, you two can finish undressing each other, then both undress me, with a lot of groping and wandering tongues, no doubt!