All Comments on 'Daughter's Friend Needs a Place'

....was a bit of proof reading to catch the spelling errors and grammatical typos. Otherwise an excellent storyline executed interestingly.

Garter 'built'?? Shouldn't that be 'belt'??

Do you bother to Proof Read??

Fitness Girls with muscle bodies put me hard to.

Stupid. Spelling errors are a big turn off. So is lack of a dictionary. Body physic?

I'll give you five stars if you promise never to write again, or at least but your work in the bondage and torture section.

One star. "I want you to photography me"? Get any editor.

Loved it. Looking forward to more~

All these commenters getting so nasty with a few errors in spelling, etc.. This

world is going to hell in a hand basket. Great story, Brian.....

Excellent story, well done.

Liked it I’m 65 and I love playing with women about 27 yrs old i still can’t believe some women like this grandad

Yes a proof reader to catch the spelling errors would be a plus. However spelling is more an aptitude than a skill. Reach out to me if you ever want a proofreader. Your writing skill is worthy of a bit of time before publishing here.

The story is skillfully crafted and believable in addition to being erotic. The flow is natural and it is so clear that the characters are very glad to be together. The epilogue portion confirms this and indicates that this was just a beginning to a lovely future.