All Comments on 'Daughters of the Moon Pt. 06'

Most excellent! I love that your vampire families differ greatly from one another, and the way you use that to enhance the story. All vampires are not the same.

Thanks! It means a lot to me that you find the world building interesting.

I can't claim its my original work. I drew a lot from other media, but I tried to give it my own interesting spin. Glad you like it!

Another 5 stars from me. This chapter has lots of moments that made me think that ‘The wheel weaves as the wheel wills’.

@hudsini

Oh man I’m so glad you got it! I was trying to write it like “battle of two rivers from the bad guy’s perspective.”

Well played. So many little things shouted it. From the name of the town and the spring to the stubbornly townsfolk. I’m loving the story. A well crafted tale so far.