Dave

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I walked out of the hotel and to the bar on the next corner. I really don't need another drink but I just couldn't stay there. Couldn't be there when she opens the door to come down the hallway. So here I can have a whiskey, give them both time to clear the hell out. Whiskey comes and I take a sip, feel it warm my mouth, feel it wash her taste away. I pull out my phone. I want to go on Facebook, find her on there. See what she looks like when she's dressed up. When she's out with her girlfriends. When she's at the beach. As I go to unlock the phone, all those texts that lit up the phone on the bedroom floor are still waiting for me.

Becky: You know it's too late for Greece.

Phil: Are you fucking that girl in there?

Becky: Do you have to go?

Billy: I just heard! I mean HEARD. Go man!

Billy: Try not to whimper so much though

Phil: You. Are. The Man.

Becky: If you really mean it, I guess I could drive up. We could weekend in the city. Just keep the hotel room another couple days. Talk. Maybe see if there's something.

Becky: Hello?

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Hooked1957Hooked1957almost 2 years ago

Nicely done. Great take on this.

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LightningSeedLightningSeedover 5 years agoAuthor
Crusader

Thanks for your comments. I don’t know that there will be any future pieces with these characters, but you never know :-)

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
TBC

Good view from Dave. He didn't brag about his larger than average cock, but she will want more of it. They will reconnect thru FuckBook, and she Will get more of his big dick after Mexico & Greece are all done. Hoping this is a To Be Continued story, and we get more of their story. Five Stars from me.

LightningSeedLightningSeedover 5 years agoAuthor
Re: NVDiceGuy

Thanks. I have considered a third part but really would love it if a female author could write it...

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 5 years ago
Another hit

On the tail of Duck Hunt this again shows legitimate life like feelings that an experience like this would generate and how messed up your head would get in a situation like this.

Interesting to write a third story from her perspective.

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