All Comments on 'Dave and Elaine Ch. 01'

This is how it happens to the innocent clueless guy - he is taken by some horny woman, God bless her!

Good story...waiting for part. 2.....please! Great story line. I imagine that he'll find his wife giving it to his "buddy" hard and fast when they look in the house, but I guess it could go another way....LOL. Great characters.

I figured that she's been cheating on him for a while.

with everyone around him knowing what is going on. Yeah, it can happen occasionally, but really...3 years and Danielle knows all about it and he doesn't pick up any clue? Get real. So I took away one point...but still a good read.

Really, only had sex with her husband once in 3 years? Unbelievable!. had you said once or twice a month, it would have done as well for the story line, but not been so unbelievable. What we have is such a short segment of a story, probably it would have been better to publish this one and the following one at the same time.