All Comments on 'Dave loses Mia to BBC Boss Pt. 04'

Very good story! With lots of potential to grow. I like the details on explaining the girls looks and sexyness.

Sadly there was no cumshot scene including some eagerly swallowing, but I bet there will be more.

Not happy with how you are turning Dave. Let it just be a dream, based on all the fucking that was going on. He never went home and he never interacted with Emily. Just let it go and have him drive home at 9am and continue the story. Don’t ruin it for us.

Love the story, hopefully Dave gets some texts or pics from Mia on her outing with the two girls. Maybe some pics where it looks like they might have some lotion of there faces or could all 3 of them have cum on them.

Love love love this story!! I just reread all the parts. Please don't let it be over!!! I want Dave to hold open Mia's legs for Mike while he enters her.

I can see it now, Emily charges dave with battery/rape. He goes to prison and becomes a bbc ragdoll. Mia becomes a bbc slut...along with their daughter. What a pair of 'role models' for parents, lol

Time to put this story to bed. Getting worse as you go on.

On with the story dear writer!

waiting for more involvement with mike and kendal. this story leaves you guessing if the daugther was in with the mother or not. with the guys leaving the house, but the ladies are already asleep when he got back home

Don't listen to that post. This story is ramping up! Please tell me this isn't the end!

This is so damn boring and not any different from a plethora of others around here.

I love to be blacked and my husband plays and dresses as a fen]male. He gets mt]y lover penis hard and guides it inside me. We let him watch as he wants to clean us off. He lets my bull fuck hin

Would like to see some DP in the next chapter please

racist shit

When do we get part 5???????

For those who are interested, Part 5 coming in about a week! Happy to get input :)

I laughed when the young black boy fell into the worthless S***. You could hear his screaming echoes as he fell.

Dave needs to drop the GF and get out of that situation. It’s never gonna change back.