All Comments on 'Dave's Story: Man of the House'

A good first attempt. I hope you write some more.

Motherly mounds that adorned her chest ..... oh good grief!

What an excellent story, especially for a first effort. I enjoyed every word, and it was so well written to. 5 Stars!

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

A good story for your first one. I liked the characters and the scenario you used to start it off. I liked the build up and only saw a couple of grammar mistakes. They did not take away from the story. A couple of things that would improve on this story ( I think) would to be more dialogue and more descriptive words in relation to their love. I like to be as interested in the characters as the story itself. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I really enjoyed your story of love and great sex. I wonder if his sister cottons on to the relationship though and joins in. Keep writing I enjoy your style.

A great first attempt. Keep writing.

Very good first story. Proofreading is important. I wish I'd had a chance like that.

Very well written a few small things I noticed but didn’t distracted from the story . Hope to see more from you and thanks for sharing.

Most mothers and sons should experience this type of raw sex. I loved the way you began and then brought the story up to the present. I also loved the way you did not "pussy foot" around and got straight to the point. Do not worry about the professional grammarians who would criticize every jot & tittle. Please continue writing pure raw mom and son sex.

Thanks for such a great story. Your Mum sounds a very sweet lady.

Great story for all, but the ending. Author you killed a love story and made it a lousy tale. from a 5 star to a 2 star.

The only thing I wondered about was how your sister never heard the two of you fucking?Lol Your sister never walked in on you, or caught you in the act either. It's good that she wasn't around much, or maybe didn't care about your incestuous affair. Keep on writing. Five Stars.

Very nice read. A few typos but nothing too bad. Thanks, looking forward to more stories.

Liked the story I remember my mom and aunt me did threesome together got to cum in my aunt first then my mom.first thing my said to me you know I might be knocked up by you and your mom too.they both came back with some news well mister we are both pregnant and I said yes both woman are in early forties carrying my kids in them.told my aunt your getting divorced moving in us sleep in same king size bed we still have sex together they both gave me each three kids

Great story. Hope u write some more.

`but the ending was not good. the thing about dating others were uncalled for. this destroyed the romantic vibe of the story. if they were exclusive, then the story would have been a great story.

Can u build this story further

What a great story. I want to read more. Did your sister ever get involved?

More please

Man….. never share your mother!!!!! Ruined the story!