All Comments on 'Dave's Surprise Ch. 05'

Enjoyed the turn of events, simple complexities that make you want to read more. I like the fact that you lead the reader to use their own imagination on a sexual and tension voyage that you create. Good job!

Didn't really like all the trouble he is having with Marie but maybe it will work out.

What a fabulous series! I loved every instalment. I thought that the story flowed nicely, had just enough explicit description and made me wish I could experience something like that. Thank you!

I noticed the last chapter was submitted very long ago. I sincerely hope you will write more of the same soon.