All Comments on 'Davey Seduces Sexy Susan Ch. 01'

by KristaMorane

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Chucky1902Chucky1902about 11 years ago
Good story

Good stories, but seems like you haven't been writing lately. Expectantly waiting for chapter 2.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 4 years ago

I just found this. It's an extremely erotic story. I love how the Susan knew all along what the plan was, but Davey was in the dark, trying to figure it out. I agree with Chucky1902; how about a chapter 2? All the more so since there's some truth in the story. My guess is, you got the messages, and they were erotic, but it stopped there. Maybe, just maybe, you also wnet to work braless one day just to see what would happen.....~~ JBE

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
More, please!`

Maybe...She "stretches"...reaching back and moving his hips forward...

while rotating her head in a kind of "neck dance"? +))

KristaMoraneKristaMoranealmost 4 years agoAuthor
Twist my arm

Thank you, KingCuddle, for your kind words. Truth is I submitted ch. 02 quite a while ago and it was rejected. I accepted the reasons. Since that time I've had other stories successfully published. So, maybe I give this another shot. Have you figured out yet the point where reality departs and fantasy begins?

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