All Comments on 'David Comes Home Ch. 01'

by karenmom

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good start

Excellent start hon. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good Start

Can't wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story

It could be real. Is it? I'm curious to the next part.

mature_a100mature_a100over 14 years ago
Looking forward to this continuing.

Karen I am loving your story's and your stile of writing, only mild criticism is that I would like them to be slightly longer, just when you get me really aroused you leave me hanging ! ! !

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
PLEASE MORE !

I hope, karenmom is turning into Exhibitionism-Mom next time.

Thanks for this very good Story!

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 14 years ago
it seems real to me also

will be looking for the next chapter

nudistgreg62nudistgreg62over 14 years ago
Excellent

Can't wait till the next chapter.

2275jr2275jrover 14 years ago
Taking another step for son to see

love the story very exciting and so horny. do hope we dont wait to long for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
True or not?

I wonder it you have done this or have thought of doing it in real life?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice postcard

nice postcard length story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
it's an excellent sign that this mother...

gets wet between her legs as she parades in front of her 19 year old boy in just her panties, with her tits bare and her cunt lips visible through the sheer fabric. I bet her David went to his room to whack off. Let's hope and pray that in the sequel the boy finds a better place to blow his hot young balls than into a stupid kleenex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
short and sweet

I love the stories that are short and sweet and get to the point. Nudity is a wonderful thing because we are all beautiful. Love this story and the author.

victorianstiffvictorianstiffover 3 years ago
Awesome!!! Loved it

Great story I loved it. Thanks for sharing and for you beautiful pic. Wish you were my mum!!!!!

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